Mesmers: Page 1

Page 1. I hope the text is legible, that's my biggest fear. Deviantart is a lot better than Tumblr when it comes to image compression, so I shouldn't be too worried. I also hope everything is clear enough plotwise. There's a glossary on my Tumblr, but I'll add one here if it's really necessary.

6/2/17 Edit: I've redone the text on the first 7 pages to make it less garish. Also tried to make the colors less eye-murdering. As unhappy as I am with these first few pages, I don't think I'll be redrawing them any time soon. I want to keep the originals up so that I can see how much the comic's art style improves (or degrades D: ) over time.

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